Sunday, October 7, 2012

Beth Ann's VISION




Last week we got to see a snippet of Beth Ann and the first opening night of her play. Months have gone by and she is on her first date. As a matter of fact, it's the first date she's ever had with anybody besides Kaylob. She is out with America's most eligible bachelor, Blake Tanner. She's standing in the bathroom when the unthinkable happens. She feels herself being sucked away. 
       

The bathroom faded and Beth Ann found herself standing in the middle of a jungle. Where is she? Could this be real or is she losing her mind?




A dog wailed—dear God, she wanted to go save the poor animal. Then she heard Kaylob’s voice.
“Beth Ann, please, I love you.”
Mud covered the ground, but this time she was able to move. The humid stench swarmed around her, the air thick with heat. Birds squawked and other creatures continued getting louder.

“Kaylob!” she cried over the sounds of the jungle. “Kaylob, please!”










                                             




                                         

                                               
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18 comments:

  1. Brenda as usual the pictures match the scene. This is so intense. I hope you continue on this next week. Let everyone see's what happens next. Please! Great six!

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  2. Great choice to show how hard the visions are for Beth Ann. She's a tough cookie, though! It will take more than abject terror to bring her down! ;-)

    ~Joyce Scarbrough

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  3. Wow, what and intense and vivid scene. Very well done!

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  4. This is intense and very well done. I hope this book is out soon Brenda. Can't wait to read it from beginning to end. Really good job.

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  5. Poor Beth Ann on her first date and has this vision. Can't wait to see what happens next. Very nicely done.

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  6. this sent shivers down my spine. can't wait to see what happens next.

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  7. This scene gave me a spooky feeling. Godd job Brenda

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  8. *Good* not Godd, blog won't let me remove and edit the comment so here's the edited version. This scene gave me a spooky feeling. Good job Brenda.

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  9. This was so good and not scary but intense, I sure what to know what happens next. So I hope it's tune in next week. lol Really good job Brenda.

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  10. It's a vision she has? I felt lost though the visuals and auditory descriptions were excellent

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    1. Sorry Sue, Here's what happened. Beth Ann is on her first date with Blake Tanner and goes to wash her hands. While standing in front of the sink she gets pulled away and finds herself in the jungles of Vietnam. This is one of the first visions she has, although there will be many more. They are very intense. They come to her day and night and she never knows when they will hit. I hope that explains it better. I forget some people don't know about her visions. :-)

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  11. This is Bradly I have a hard time reading the numbers and signing in even though I am following the blog. So here goes mine. lol I got it. she's having a vision and that's creepy but very good. I saw you said she's going to have a lot. Good lord that must be a pain. We can't wait to read more, I don't think you mentioned these visions to us but what a twist.

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  12. Thank to everyone for checking in on Six Setence Sunday. Next week I'll give you a bit more of what happens next. Big hugs to everyone. :-)

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  13. Her love of Kaylob comes across clear. There's no question what she's feeling. Very well done.

    --Kimberly K. Comeau

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  14. I'm one of your biggest fans. I loved it. Colleen. I had a hard time getting Goggle to let me on after I followed you?

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  15. Great work Brenda! An emotion-packed 6! :)

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  16. Great description of the jungle, very vivid. And her last line, it's wrenching. Good job!

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  17. Thank all of you so very much. You're comments touch my heart. Big hugs to everyone. :-)

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