Last week you saw Beth Ann have a vision. She was out on her first
date with another man, Blake Tanner. After months of visions and dreams, Beth
Ann is ready to move forward.
Six months later she is still dating Blake Tanner and doing her
best to feel love again. She's known Blake almost as long as she has
Kaylob. They had all grown up in Novato, a small town in Northern California.
Now Blake's rich, famous and America's most eligible bachelor.
After being on the road touring in her Broadway show, she
has decided to move in with Blake in Riverside California.
But before she does, she
needs to take a trip down memory lane, back to the apartment that she and Kaylob had lived in.
How do you say goodbye to the love of your life? How does her heart ever
let go?
The pain ripped through her like a sheet of glass being
shattered. The memories were precious, but they
tormented her heart.
tormented her heart.
She looked down at the ring on her finger. She was starting a new life and knew what she had to do. The ring
had been her shining band of hope, but she had to let it go. Struggling to see through the tears, she slipped off
the ring, placed her lips against the circle of gold and gave it a kiss goodbye.
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Brenda this scene is gut wrenching. You can feel her pain and the description is awesome! Great job Brenda!
ReplyDeleteDean what a good guy. You're always here and at our interviews. What a guy. Thank you for your kind words and support. :-)
Deletenothing like making us cry first thing in the morning. Really good scene and so sad, you can feel her pain.
ReplyDeleteAhh! Jenny girl, thank you sweetie for always being here and saying such sweet things. :-)
DeleteOmg that is so heart shattering, your description is spot on and so well done. Beautiful job Brenda.
ReplyDeleteThanks you Lisa for hiking all the way over to your friends house to be here. And all your support. :-)
DeleteWhat an emotionally felt six Brenda, again, big applause to you!
ReplyDeleteThank you Cindy for your words of support and always being here. :-)
DeletePoor Beth Ann. Her anguish comes through in every word. Great six, Brenda.
ReplyDeleteAnd of course thank you Joyce, for always giving me wonderful words of support and being here every week. Big hugs :-)
DeleteOne of life's very difficult moments, well depicted. Sad, effective six!
ReplyDeleteThank you Veronica for the supportive words and for stopping by. :-)
DeleteI'm in tears!...I'm happy that she is moving on, but I'm sad that she has lost the love of her life.. The one thing worth living for..I know there will always be a hole in her heart where Kaylob is supposed to be....
ReplyDeleteThank you Lorie and if you watch that new photo book album maybe you won't be so sad. There are hints in that book. :-) Thanks for stopping bye and being so supportive. :-)
DeleteBrenda that is griping and you can feel her pain. Riveting Scene and so well put. Wonderful Six Sentence.
ReplyDeleteAlex you're such a dear friend, thank you for always being here every week. And thank you for the kind words. :-)
DeleteBradly here. Marsha and I loved this scene but so darn sad. Is Kaylob really gone for good? This was sad and touched our hearts.
ReplyDeleteThank you Bradly and Marsha for being so very supportive. You're going to have to read the book Bradly to find out. ;-)
DeleteVery poignant six. Oh, my ... Well done.
ReplyDeleteThank you Virginia for the kind words and thank you for stopping by. :-)
DeleteAs always a great six, Brenda! I happened to be listening to "All by Myself" when I read your snippet which made it all the sadder :(
ReplyDeleteThank you Elyzabeth for the kind words. That song is sad so I can see where it made you feel sadder. Thank you for stopping by and letting me make you sad. ;-)
DeleteDear lord, this is just so sad. Is she going to marry this new guy? I thought Kaylob was coming back. This made me start thinking. Great six and now when can I read this book? how soon before it's out. Love it but made me sad.
ReplyDeleteThank you Shannon for being here every week. We still don't know how soon it will be out because it's with the publisher. I promise as soon as I know anything, I'll let you know. :-)
DeleteBeautifully evocative! Wonderful six.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Jennifer and thanks so much for stopping by. :-)
DeleteI can't even begin to imagine how difficult a decision that has to be. Excellent job with this emotional scene.
ReplyDeleteThank you Jess, and yes she has some difficult decisions coming up. Thank you so much for stopping by. :-)
DeleteWhat a touching scene and a heartbreaking point in her life. You've done a great job depicting her grief. Very nice, Brenda.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much and thank you for stopping by. :-)
DeleteI agree really well done scene. I don't think we ever forget past loves
ReplyDeleteI agree Sue and I think your first love is always special. :-)
DeleteThank you all so very much. I'm touched by your words of encouragement and everything you had to say. Big hugs to you all. :-)
ReplyDeleteWell done, Brenda. Wow! Such a moving 6!
ReplyDeleteThank you Karen and thank you for stopping by. :-)
DeleteAww, that really made my breath catch!
ReplyDeletePut that in the wrong place. Thank you so much and for stopping by also. :-)
DeleteThank you Pippa Jay and thank you for stopping by. :-)
ReplyDeleteWow ... this is utterly heartbreaking. Beautifully written!
ReplyDeleteWhat a heart wrenching scene.
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