We
left off with Beth Ann having a major meltdown. Now it's been almost one full year since Kaylob was declared dead. She has
landed a lead role in a Broadway production. Her lifelong dream is happening.
But the dream is bittersweet. Kaylob had always been there with her when she imagined this day. In this scene she sees her name in lights for the first time. Her heart is filled with gratitude but her heart is also empty without her Kaylob.
She
decided to take a break and walk outside to see the marquee lit up with The
Chorus Years, A Musical Review of Times. Her heart skipped beat and tears
glistened in her eyes when she read the next line: Introducing singer
actress Elizabeth Ann Rose.
Seeing
her name up in lights felt surreal, she would truly be stepping into her dream.
The sky was clear, and off to the west she saw some twinkling stars. She looked
at her watch and her eyes filled with more tears as she gazed up into the sky.
Next week Beth Ann has a very strong vision of Kaylob. I thought I'd take you into that experience with her.
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This scene is great. In some ways she reached her dreams but in other ways it's sad. Great Six Brenda.
ReplyDeleteOh, I LOVE the picture so much! I could feel Beth Ann's conflicting emotions in this six and pined for Kaylob right along with her. Such a great story!
ReplyDelete~Joyce Scarbrough
Been waiting for this part. I could feel one part of her joy and the other part of her pain. Good job Brenda.
ReplyDeleteThis is really good, no doubt about her conflict. Great Six.
ReplyDeleteLOVE THIS!!!! I just can't wait to read the book.
ReplyDeleteNice job Brenda. looking forward to next week.
ReplyDeletevery sad. Looking at the stars and speaking to him is very real
ReplyDeleteGreat six, Brenda. It's so heartfelt.
ReplyDeleteThis is such a big moment for her. Looking forward to experiencing more :) Great six, Brenda!
ReplyDeletesuch a special moment but she can't be happy all the way. it's really sad in many ways. heartbreaking but happy.
ReplyDeleteWow, you did a great job with this six. I'm very excited about reading what happens next week. Excellent job, and thanks for checking out my blog.
ReplyDeleteHow touching. I was so there, in the moment. I so want her to succeed.
ReplyDelete--Kimberly K. Comeau
Wow Brenda, you have such a wonderful way of making the whole story come alive.
ReplyDeleteThank you all so very much. I am so happy to hear you enjoyed what I wrote. Big hugs to you all.. :-)
ReplyDeleteLovely six. It's so sweet. :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Ianiseb. :-) Looking forward to this Sunday again.
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