Sunday, September 30, 2012

Beth Ann lands a lead role on Broadway








We left off with Beth Ann having a major meltdown. Now it's been almost one full year since Kaylob was declared dead. She has landed a lead role in a Broadway production. Her lifelong dream is happening. But the dream is bittersweet. Kaylob had always been there with her when she imagined this day. In this scene she sees her name in lights for the first time. Her heart is filled with gratitude but her heart is also empty without her Kaylob.



She decided to take a break and walk outside to see the marquee lit up with The Chorus Years, A Musical Review of Times. Her heart skipped beat and tears glistened in her eyes when she read the next line: Introducing singer actress Elizabeth Ann Rose.
Seeing her name up in lights felt surreal, she would truly be stepping into her dream. The sky was clear, and off to the west she saw some twinkling stars. She looked at her watch and her eyes filled with more tears as she gazed up into the sky.




“Kaylob, look at my name up there,” she whispered









Next week Beth Ann has a very strong vision of Kaylob. I thought I'd take you into that experience with her.




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16 comments:

  1. This scene is great. In some ways she reached her dreams but in other ways it's sad. Great Six Brenda.

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  2. Oh, I LOVE the picture so much! I could feel Beth Ann's conflicting emotions in this six and pined for Kaylob right along with her. Such a great story!

    ~Joyce Scarbrough

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  3. Been waiting for this part. I could feel one part of her joy and the other part of her pain. Good job Brenda.

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  4. This is really good, no doubt about her conflict. Great Six.

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  5. LOVE THIS!!!! I just can't wait to read the book.

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  6. Nice job Brenda. looking forward to next week.

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  7. very sad. Looking at the stars and speaking to him is very real

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  8. This is such a big moment for her. Looking forward to experiencing more :) Great six, Brenda!

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  9. such a special moment but she can't be happy all the way. it's really sad in many ways. heartbreaking but happy.

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  10. Wow, you did a great job with this six. I'm very excited about reading what happens next week. Excellent job, and thanks for checking out my blog.

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  11. How touching. I was so there, in the moment. I so want her to succeed.
    --Kimberly K. Comeau

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  12. Wow Brenda, you have such a wonderful way of making the whole story come alive.

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  13. Thank you all so very much. I am so happy to hear you enjoyed what I wrote. Big hugs to you all.. :-)

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  14. Lovely six. It's so sweet. :)

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    1. Thanks Ianiseb. :-) Looking forward to this Sunday again.

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