Sunday, September 23, 2012

DID SHE WANT TO DIE






Last week we left off with Beth Ann chopping off her hair one strand at a time. She doesn't believe Kaylob is dead but just learned he's been missing for two months. She cut off her hair and jabbed her scalp leaving a trail of blood in the bathroom. Blood rushed down her face from the damage to her scalp. Her family and friends are pleading with her to open the BATHROOM DOOR! Now she glances at herself in the mirror and realizes what she has done.




Beth Ann stood like a weather-beaten statue, naked and dead. She had become a freak. Distorted 

images twisted and shifted in the mirror. She stared at her image and started screaming. 

The jiggling of the doorknob couldn't stop her uncontrolled agony.The door finally flung open and 

her mom cried when she saw her.


  “Oh my God. Beth Ann! What have you done?”








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13 comments:

  1. Man Brenda, this is an intense scene and where do you come up with all these great pictures. Gave me a chill. Great six sentences.

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  2. This scene was hard to read, but it was so necessary for both Beth Ann and the reader to deal with all the agony. And yes, your pictures are always spot on! Great job!

    ~Joyce Scarbrough

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  3. we love this scene even though it's sad and i'll be glad when she's back on her feet and steady again. good scene.

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  4. love this scene Brenda and so glad you shared it with me. I am finally on here. Had to go through some steps but I did it. Really nice job on the pictures and the scene.

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  5. Very devastating, but like Joyce said, necessary for Beth Ann as it's the ultimate explosion yet.

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  6. very sad scene, it's always hard to lose someone you love. Her breakdown is intense. Nicely done!

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  7. very understandable her reactions and well described

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  8. This scene is touching and goes right to the heart of the reader. Well done.

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  9. Was a really good scene. Hope she comes out of this.

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  10. Great description here...makes me really feel for Beth Ann. Excellent job.

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  11. Fantastic emotion in this. My heart's in my throat with mom, wishing I could see her. And I feel Beth Ann's agony and then the startling realization. Excellently done.

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  12. Oh my goodness! There's so much conflict in just those few sentences. Great job!

    Michelle :)

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  13. Thank you all so much for your wonderful words of encouragement. Your words mean the world to me. Big hugs :-)

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