Sunday, August 19, 2012

Stop saying Goodbye!

                                      Saying goodbye again.

          I left you last week with Kaylob coming home early from Vietnam. Beth Ann was a very happy lady until she sees something in his eyes and he says the words. "I'm going back to Vietnam." Now, he has to tell her that he is only home for seven more days.


The storm outside swelled in waves, matching her mood. He needed to explain what he meant. After all the years of waiting, this would be unbearable. They were engaged and supposed to be getting married. All those promises he’d made to her before he left. No way in hell was he going to Vietnam again.
Okay, she had to breathe. She swallowed, took a deep breath and said, “What do you mean you’re going back?”

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  1. Oh, it's on now! I'm so glad I've read it all and don't have to wait to see what happens next!

    ~Joyce Scarbrough

  2. what a teaser now I can't wait to see what happens, but I just can't wait to read this book.

  3. oh boy, I bet she's gonna be furious. Hope you'll post more next week. Good job!

  4. i wish i didn't have to wait to see what happens next. can you give me a hint?

  5. Love your wording of her mood. Gorgeous.

  6. Aw man!... I feel sorry for her, but on the other hand I can understand where he is coming from...Soooo, when will the book be ready? .. :)

  7. It's easy to see both sides in this story.