Sunday, November 18, 2012

The first time


Welcome to Six Sentence Sunday. I'm so very happy you stopped by to pay me a visit. :-)




Last week we left off with Kaylob and Beth Ann making a choice to be with each other after waiting for so many years. Released from a promise he made to our brother. Finally they can experience love and become one before he heads back to war.
 This night will be the beginning of a new kind of love, the kind that melts your soul. 

Here is a little sneak peek into the beginning of their first time.




She watched him unbutton his shirt and felt captivated. His muscles rippled down his stomach, with a little patch of hair on his belly button. He was magnificent. Even the new scars she’d never seen screamed sexy.

Other parts of her body started getting ready for what was to come before she fully understood the feeling inside. She wanted to tell him, but her voice got lost and she was sure it was somewhere between her legs.


   He grinned, still watching her. “I’m getting in the shower. Would you like to join me?”








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31 comments:

  1. sexy but her losing her voice between her legs. Funny! lol Love it!

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    1. Thank you Dean, I think the blog is closing down after Dec but I'm hoping to continue with sharing SIX Sentence.. Thank you so much. :-)

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  2. that just cracks me up. I Know it's supposed to be sexy but that line just makes me laugh. Love that part. I can feel her desire.

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  3. cute and sexy. great job again!

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  4. One of my favorite scenes! So sweet and sexy!

    ~Joyce Scarbrough

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    1. Thanks Joyce, you were such a big help making it work. :-)

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  5. The humor just fit wonderfully into this heated scene.

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  6. Ohh my! Sexy 6! Loved this: but her voice got lost and she was sure it was somewhere between her legs. Totally made me chuckle. Awesome!! :D

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    1. Thanks Karen, so glad it made you laugh. She is a nervous Nelly. LOL :-)

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  7. A sexy build-up to what is about the happen!

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    1. Thanks so much Jamie. Glad you stopped by. :-)

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  9. omg, this is sexy but that line between her legs is so funny. Great six Brenda. lol

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    1. Thank you Jennifer. Glad you liked it.. LOL :-)

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  10. holy girl, that statement made me bend over laughing. It's also very sexy. Do we get to see what happens next? I sure hope so.

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    1. I'm so glad Shannon. Always happy to hear someone laughed at the spot I hoped was a little funny. :-)

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  11. sexy, amusing and emotional all at the same time

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    1. Thanks so much Sue and thank you for stopping by. :-)

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  12. The desire and the lack of knowledge come through so clearly.

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    1. Thanks Sue Ann. Glad you saw it come through. And thank you for stopping by. :-)

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  13. Marsha and I are both cracking up. What a great sexy and funny scene. Way to go Brenda!

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    1. Hey Bradly. Tell Marsha I'm so glad she enjoyed it. Glad you both did. Thanks for stopping by. :-)

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  14. Nice touch with her voice. And his invitation to the shower--sweet and sexy. Well done.

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    1. Thanks so much Virginia and thank you for stopping by. :-)

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  15. I can't imagine she'll say no to that invitation. :D

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