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You saw last week how nervous Beth Ann was because she's never made love. But she had been teasing and tempting Kaylob for so many years.But he's leaving again in a few days, back to fight in Vietnam, she can't bear that thought of him leaving again and not being with him all the way.
This week let's turn up the heat a little. She loves him and he loves her.
And they've waited for so many years....... But Kaylob is enjoying watching her watching him and even teases her back by taking his good sweet time. Moving slowly around the room turning off lights and lightening candles and watching her over his shoulder. Beth Ann is aware he is teasing her badly.
Everything seemed to be moving in slow
motion. He got back up and walked into the kitchen and cracked open the window.
A cool
breeze rustled through the curtains, bringing in rain drops that spattered on
the floor. Somewhere off in the distance, a low rumble of thunder sounded and a
bolt of lightning lit up the room, matching her electrified desires. Nothing
could extinguish her flame. She wanted him and wanted him bad.
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Very sexy six!
ReplyDeleteThank you Cindy..
DeleteLove this buildup Brenda, shows what a tease he is. Loved this Six, great job!
ReplyDeleteGlad you liked it Lisa. Thank you.
DeleteAh ha, now I'd like to read this scene all the way through. Very nice visual.
ReplyDeleteThank you Dean. Soon Soon.. LOL
DeleteYou and me both Dean. Nice build up and great discription!
ReplyDeleteYou've read some of it Alex. Glad you liked it. :-)
DeleteGreat snippet, he's very sweet and I could totally picture the scene...
ReplyDeleteThank you so much. He is very sweet. Glad you could picture it. :-)
DeleteLove this and he is very handsome and sexy. I could also picture this. Great Six Brenda.
ReplyDeleteYes he is.. Glad you liked it Shannon. Thank you for coming.
DeleteHe's not the only one who's a tease! ;-) Great six as always, Brenda!
ReplyDelete~Joyce Scarbrough
Very true Joyce.. Thank you.. :-)
DeleteTeasing is good... and he sounds like a master
ReplyDeleteLOL thank you Sue, he should be after all the years they waited. :-)
DeleteGoing off to war does seem to have aphrodisiac tendencies.
ReplyDeleteI can see that. Thank you for stopping by. :-)
DeleteFantastic 6! The description was beautiful and real, and I could feel her emotion! :) 'Liked' your author page too!
ReplyDeleteThanks Karen so much . For stopping by here and liking my Author page. :-) I'll check yours out also. :-)
DeleteLoved this Brenda, so romantic and could understand their desire.
ReplyDeleteThank you and thanks for stopping by. :-)
DeleteSmoking!!! great job Brenda, loved the buildup and how he's teasing her.
ReplyDeleteGlad you liked it Jennifer and thank you for always being here. :-)
DeleteUm...I love the way he's taking his sweet time, building up the tension. Great six!
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Denise and thank you for visiting. :-)
DeleteThe build up and atmosphere are both great. Lovely six!
ReplyDeleteThanks Virginia and thank you for stopping by. :-)
DeleteVery sexy, I loved reading this ~
ReplyDeleteJamie, I'm so very glad you enjoyed it. Thank you so much for stopping by. :-)
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