Sunday, November 11, 2012

He's a tease


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You saw last week how nervous Beth Ann was because she's never made love. But she had been teasing and tempting  Kaylob for so many years.But he's leaving again in a few days, back to fight in Vietnam, she can't bear that thought of him leaving again and not being with him all the way.  

 This week let's turn up the heat a little. She loves him and he loves her.

 And they've waited for so many years....... But Kaylob is enjoying watching her watching him and even teases her back by taking  his good sweet time. Moving slowly around the room turning off lights and lightening candles and watching her over his shoulder. Beth Ann is aware he is teasing her badly. 


Everything seemed to be moving in slow motion. He got back up and walked into the kitchen and cracked open the window. A cool breeze rustled through the curtains, bringing in rain drops that spattered on the floor. Somewhere off in the distance, a low rumble of thunder sounded and a bolt of lightning lit up the room, matching her electrified desires. Nothing could extinguish her flame. She wanted him and wanted him bad.

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30 comments:

  1. Love this buildup Brenda, shows what a tease he is. Loved this Six, great job!

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  2. Ah ha, now I'd like to read this scene all the way through. Very nice visual.

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  3. You and me both Dean. Nice build up and great discription!

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    1. You've read some of it Alex. Glad you liked it. :-)

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  4. Great snippet, he's very sweet and I could totally picture the scene...

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    1. Thank you so much. He is very sweet. Glad you could picture it. :-)

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  5. Love this and he is very handsome and sexy. I could also picture this. Great Six Brenda.

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    1. Yes he is.. Glad you liked it Shannon. Thank you for coming.

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  6. He's not the only one who's a tease! ;-) Great six as always, Brenda!

    ~Joyce Scarbrough

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  7. Teasing is good... and he sounds like a master

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    1. LOL thank you Sue, he should be after all the years they waited. :-)

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  8. Going off to war does seem to have aphrodisiac tendencies.

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    1. I can see that. Thank you for stopping by. :-)

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  9. Fantastic 6! The description was beautiful and real, and I could feel her emotion! :) 'Liked' your author page too!

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    1. Thanks Karen so much . For stopping by here and liking my Author page. :-) I'll check yours out also. :-)

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  10. Loved this Brenda, so romantic and could understand their desire.

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  11. Smoking!!! great job Brenda, loved the buildup and how he's teasing her.

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    1. Glad you liked it Jennifer and thank you for always being here. :-)

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  12. Um...I love the way he's taking his sweet time, building up the tension. Great six!

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    1. Thank you so much Denise and thank you for visiting. :-)

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  13. The build up and atmosphere are both great. Lovely six!

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    1. Thanks Virginia and thank you for stopping by. :-)

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    1. Jamie, I'm so very glad you enjoyed it. Thank you so much for stopping by. :-)

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