Sunday, September 2, 2012

Will it be the end?




Beth Ann can't believe he signed up to go back to the Vietnam War again. 
                                                         



Last week we left off with Kaylob telling Beth Ann he was leaving again. It took him a while to explain why, but nothing could make her understand. She had planned for them to be married when he got home. She doesn't want to hear why he's going back, because nothing makes sense to her. He tells her all about his brothers in his Bravo troop and how they are dying over there. But can anything fix the fact that he did this without talking it over. Riverside California is nothing like the safe  little city they grew up in . She made Kaylob a promise never to leave when she was angry again. But didn't he make her a promise also?



“Beth Ann, you made a promise to me, remember? Never to take off when you’re angry.”

“Don’t you dare talk to me about broken promises! Seems you can keep promises to everyone else   but me, even my brother Cole.”She ripped the ring off her finger and threw it at him, hitting him in the chest.“I don’t want to marry you anymore! Go ahead, have sex with someone else. Marry someone else. I’m done.”



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8 comments:

  1. Oh, don't I know how much it hurts when your characters have to break a promise! But sometimes it just has to be done, right? ;-)

    ~Joyce

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  2. this scene is intense Brenda, can't wait to see what happens.

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  3. guess she's a bit ticked off but I bet she don't mean it.

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  4. maybe he should rethink his choice.

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  5. he should have talked it over with her, good scene Brenda.

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  6. Beth Ann has a very valid point and reason to be mad.

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  7. More I read of Beth Ann & Kaylob the more excited I am for the book to come out. Love it Brenda.

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  8. Thank you everyone for your support and remarks. Big hugs. :-)

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