For the last few weeks you read some stressful snippets. So, I thought it was time for some cute moments between the two childhood sweethearts, from Kaylob's point of view.
Scene Set Up
Beth Ann had just received a letter from Blake Tanner a boy she’s known since
grammar school. Her nerves were fried. She knew Blake Tanner was the one guy Kaylob had always been jealous of. They were arch enemies in school.
Blake had always wanted Beth Ann and it was no secret. Kaylob had seen the letter drop out of her hand and hit the ground. Beth Ann had this little habit of puttering and rambling when she's nervous. So here's a little scene of what she's like when she's nervous.
Blake had always wanted Beth Ann and it was no secret. Kaylob had seen the letter drop out of her hand and hit the ground. Beth Ann had this little habit of puttering and rambling when she's nervous. So here's a little scene of what she's like when she's nervous.
He
continued slicing the bread when Beth Ann opened the refrigerator and started
pulling everythings out. She always puttered when she was nervous, and he would
venture to guess this was one of those times. He moved over and closed the
fridge.
“Feeling
a little nervous are we, sweetheart?”
“Uh,
no. Why would you say that?”
He
stared at the counter where she had pulled out eggs, a bowl of tuna, soy sauce, worcesterhire sauce, mustard
and ketchup.
He pointed, “new recipe?”
He pointed, “new recipe?”
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I love this scene! Made me laugh almost as much as the time Beth Ann was thinking that Kaylob looked so happy you'd think someone had bought him a new skillet. ;-)
ReplyDelete~Joyce Scarbrough
Oh yeah the skillet remark. I'm just coming up on that in the revision. :-) Thank you Joyce, you're the best.
DeleteBrenda that is laugh out loud funny. Great job.
ReplyDeleteThanks for being here Dean and glad you found it funny. :-)
DeleteBrenda that is hysterical. I love this scene. Beth Ann is very funny but so is Kaylob. Love them.
ReplyDeleteThanks Lisa for your ongoing support and glad you found it funny. :-)
Deletelmao now that made me laugh hard. can't even think about that as a new recipe. Great six
ReplyDeleteThanks Jenny, Glad you laughed. It's always fun to watch Beth Ann putter and ramble. LOL
DeleteROFL! That is so funny Brenda. Still LOL
ReplyDeleteThanks Cindy glad you liked that scene. But I do think we need to add a few more things to the recipe like, Sue said. Chocolate syrup.. LOL
DeleteI love this and she reminds me of someone else I know. Let me think? lol Great six Brenda very very funny.
ReplyDeleteThank you Alex and guess she reminds you of yourself. ROFL thanks for being here and glad you enjoyed the scene.
DeleteAwesome,loved the funny scene. Nice six!
ReplyDeleteGlad you liked it Shannon. Thank you so much for stopping by. :-)
DeleteNot sure I'd want to eat it, but a recipe is possible. Now if she'd added some chocolate syrup and baking powder ....
ReplyDeleteSue, I think I might just do that. Since I forgot to tell everyone that Beth Ann doesn't cook. She can't even boil water. But I think you hit it. There needs to be chocolate syrup. Thank you for stopping by and thanks for the idea. :-)
Deleteif I got nervous like that I'd sure be sick - but funny!!
ReplyDeleteHow about if we added chocolate syrup would that be better on top. LOL No Seriously Beth Ann can't cook anything. I forgot to add that to the scene set up. :-) Thank you for stopping by.
DeleteMarsha and I both cracked up over this one Brenda. Loved it.
ReplyDeleteYou are Marsha have been great. Thank you for stopping by and I'm glad you enjoyed the scene.
DeleteNice, very cute. I was going with the ingredients until I read it again. Really awful tuna salad. Yuk!
ReplyDeleteI forgot to mention that Beth Ann doesn't cook. :-) Thank you for stopping by. I think she might just add chocolate syrup to that list. lol
DeleteSadly, I have watched my sister eat weirder, more disgusting combinations of food. It's both disturbing and fascinating to watch.
ReplyDeleteHow about adding chocolate syrup. Yeah I don't know that I could watch someone eat that combo. lol :-)
DeleteLove that she 'putters' when nervous! So cute! :)
ReplyDeleteThank you Karen. Glad you found her cute. Thank you so much for stopping by. :-)
DeleteOooh, yum! Wonder what she'd make with those ingredients. Sounds like absent minded nervousness. Great six!
ReplyDeleteHi Denise. Well since she doesn't cook at all, I think it was just her nerves. LOL Thank you so much for stopping by. :-)
DeleteNice six, Brenda! Although I'm not sure what she's going to make with that mix of ingredients xD
ReplyDeleteShe's not going to make anything because she doesn't cook. But she's just nervous. LOL :-)
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